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July 4, 2013
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What am I doing... 
I'm  so soorrrrryyy I haven't been updating >,< I'm in a deep lazy mood..whatever...
I hope you like it
This might become a series...
Warning! : this has cursing and things that contain blood and gore this is not for children!
Please turn back now if you dislike this kind of thing!


Here I am sitting in the rain. Not because I'm sad or anything! I enjoy the rain very much! I like the feeling of the little wet droplets hitting against my frozen skin! Yup! I'm totally not getting sick.

The smile on my face deceives people...People walk to me laughing enjoying the happiness radiating of me...What they don't know is that everything is a lie...The smiles,the happiness,and joyfulness I seem to show...

My name is (name) (surname). When I was little I learned that life doesn't have happy endings. People say getting married is equivalent to a happy ending. It's not.
When a lover dies,or when a child in the family dies,or even if they get divorced. Would that sound like a happy ending. No. I learnt that the hard way when I was little. My mother and father got divorced. I was the only child. I didn't have friends.
When I was little my family worked me like I was a maid. It's like Cinderella but my Prince Charming never came.

But I wouldn't want people to to worry about me so I put on a smile. Of course its fake. You see,when you smile like that for so long people think actually think it's a real smile. I would really like to show the real me to someone...

I drag my feet back to to my house waiting for whatever came to me. " where have you been! I bet you where trying to get laid! " (random girl name) said.

Did I forget to mention that my mother that completely hates me adopted two sisters? No? Well now you know. Hey! This is starting to sound like Cinderella!

(random girl name 2) pulled my hair." You dirty sl*t! "

(RGN2) got a knife and started cutting me.(RGN) threw things at me. Chairs,vases,glass,plates,knives, and pots. There was a beer bottle. Now you wouldn't think suck a would do much damage would you?

(RGN) broke the glass bottle and threw one of the shards at me. Sadly to say I have the worst luck ever.

The glass shard pieced into my eyeball...


I ran outside. I needed to go to the hospital. But that never happened. I blacked out,falling feeling the cold ground collide with my body.

-le time skip brought to you by burnt scones /( '^')/-

When I woke up I see white.
Where am I? Of course I already new the answer...

The hospital! I wonder who was kind enough to bring me here!
 When I look down I see that I'm kinda nude..but my body is covered in bandages.

When I look to the side I see a blonde boy starring at my body...blushing

"Like what ya see?"
I hope you like it '^'
I'm sorry I bee lazy.....
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Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  New member  General Artist
Me: Oh yess I see you looking at me, Arthur....
awill4517 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014
make more
icefirethedragon11 Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Student Artist
dat ending tho!
Peacebuggy Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg! This is starting to sound like Cinderella! LOL
Rayman-awesomeness Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
This is great. I get the feeling too. My parents are divorced so I feel that way a lot...😅
Mythicall Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Totally loving your image/character thing! Thumb up to the story
everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Dat ending XD
HugeHetaliaFa Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"Like what ya see?" XD
Anyways, you should write more!
darkinu1000 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
This is good you think you can finish this I loved it :3
animelover4life1321 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
Thats so mean but go on pleeeeeeeaaaaaaassssssseeeee
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